I am Claver .P. Opali; from the Ivory Cost. I come to the U.S.A four years ego to live the American dream. I do not have a strong education background, but I lean that in America you could achieve all you want if you work hard. My dream is to work at the U.N. Therefore, I started leaning English to help myself understand the American society, and I study economic science to help solve the poverty problem around the world once my dream is achieved. Reading is my passion; however, writing is my night mart. I start writing long paper with prof. Joe, and I think his teaching style allowed me to exploit my creativity. His comments are very honest and encouraging. I will like to take this opportunity to summit my paper to your so that I can get the criticism that will allowed me to better my writing and my grammar. Think you for your time. Here I toke the liberty to critics the Holy Bible, I invite you to comment on it. .
Critical Paper--Claver- I choose this particular paper because it is the achievement of a long process of hard work. This paper combines my reading and writing skill developed during my tree semesters at BMCC. It is true that I still have a lot of tools to learn concerning English, but when I think about the first day I register at this school, a day in which my English repertoire contained: hi, my name is, think you and give a big smile as form of expression. Writing this paper confirm what it is been saying in American, only hard work pay. Thus, I have work my way to write and read English and I will appreciate if you could give me a constructive comment. Again, I think you for your time.
Adrienne Hayes: Hi Claver, how was living in France? Do you wish you stayed, since Bush is making it so hard for immigrants in the United States? Anyway, I hope you get what you came here for.